I do believe that my Design has a focal point located on the left side of the paper. when i squint my eyes, I usually see the left sides cross hatch. Visual flow has been establish but doesn’t utilize the whole picture frame. There is line all around the design to lead the eye around the page. I would describe the lines as happy, cheerful and peaceful. The shape and negative space around the design I do believe has been achieve in this artwork. there is negative space around the lines coming out the bottom of the page. I think that the lines with the cross hatch have been exacted very well and the overlapping effect looks nice. I don’t line how uneven the lines coming from the bottom right hand side of the screen look. For the most part, This art work has been done on a professional matter. using the rubber cement was non messy and the paper on the bristol board is pretty much even.